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Evolution
Yellow head
tallguywrites
Here then is the beta version of my strip about evolution. This is a chapter of the book Science Stories which will be out from Myriad Editions next spring. I'm sure there'll be mistakes here, so do feel free to point them out, so that I can make the necessary changes. Thank you.

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Few things that jumped out at me:

The first species in the evolutionary tree is plural, the rest are singular.

A comma's missing after the first "well" in "Well all that is well and good".

"Baleen whales which" should be "Baleen whales that".

"How it replicates and the mistakes that can happen when it does" is a fragment that felt out of place for me.

As a biologist and insect vision researcher I love this strip! I admire the patience with which you do research for your comics, whatever the topic. This is a great way to get an important message about science to people who wouldn't necessarily be interested in it in any other context. I'm looking forward to the book, because I really enjoyed reading Psychiatric tales. Keep up the good work!

Just wanted to let you know that I was finally able to pick up a copy of Psychiatric Tales. I haven't yet had a chance to read it, but I am highly looking forward to it.

This biologist says, "Well and beautifully done!" Would that every person graduating from school need to read and understand this presentation.

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