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People With Mental Illness Enhance Our Lives
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tallguywrites
The latest chapter of my Psychiatric Tales book. Thirteen pages which nearly killed me. There's still some fiddling to do with the artwork here, but it's basically done. If you see any mistakes let me know. This chapter is a one-off, as it's a mixture of photos and artwork, which I think suite the subject. I don't intend to do further chapters in this style. An experiment really.

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Brilliant once again.

Since you're open to proofreading, here are some commas that I don't think should be there:
Page 2: after "doubtful".
Page 4: around "Pet Sounds", although people do this all the time so I'm wondering if it has become accepted
Page 5, first panel: after "Wilson"
Page 10: after "loneliness"
Page 11, last panel: after "Drake"
Page 12: after "then"

I shall make the required corrections. I shall leave the Pet Sounds thing alone though, as it looks fine and therefore should be allowed. Too many commas is a common mistake that people make and I'm no different. Cheers for the input.

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